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The Price of the Necklace

by Michael J. D’Alfonsi

part 1


Curtis Thorne woke to a hollow silence. No fanfare. No sense of rebirth. Just the thud-thud-thud of his own pulse and a room that always seemed to shrink as the months passed, four greasy walls compressing closer in the twilight hours before dawn.

He kept to routine; he believed in the sacred geometry of habit. But lately, even the rituals of preparation felt hollow, an incantation recited by someone who’d forgotten the god it was meant to invoke.

The jewelry workshop was a cell and a sanctuary, all at once. The battered workbench supported a chaos of sketches, glinting tools and vials of acid that could melt flesh in seconds if mishandled. A timeworn strip of rawhide circled the bench vice. The windows, rimmed with lead and sooty with months of grime, admitted only the faintest suggestion of outside: a shift in black to bruised indigo when night’s hold relented.

Curtis’s hands were already awake before his mind: thick-fingered, nailbeds rimmed in perpetual shadow, skin puckered with burns and little crescent moons where silver wire had bitten deep. He flexed his knuckles, reached for the unfinished chain splayed on a velvet mat. Platinum links, hair-thin, almost translucent; each one welded by hand, each one a test of nerve and steady eye. He pinched two links together, held the join beneath the dispassionate lens of his head loupe. Any sign of seam, and the work was trash. The client expected flawlessness. The client would settle for nothing less.

His chest tightened as he pressed the links, testing their fealty to his vision. Would it hold? Would any of them hold? The chain bowed, the weld stretched and just for a moment he thought it would give. But it didn’t. Satisfactory, at least by his own standards. Yet the approval brought no pleasure, only a flutter of panic: one more inch of chain and one less hour before the final deadline.

Behind him, the space was even smaller, a corridor walled by steel filing cabinets and boxes labeled in his own careful script: Turquoise. Diamond Scraps. Certificates-past Due. A battered espresso machine steamed and clicked with mechanical complaint. He had given up cream and sugar months ago, another small surrender to the gods of thrift. Next to the sink, a stack of envelopes — bills, mostly — toppled like a defeated soldier.

Curtis hunched over the bench. He had a habit of leaning so close to his work that the tip of his nose dusted metal filings onto the mat. He’d heard it called “the jeweler’s hunch,” though most practitioners didn’t carry it into middle age quite so literally. But he considered his spine’s arc a badge of devotion. He hadn’t come all this way to play at ergonomics.

The necklace sat on its black pillow, the opal a shrouded in the center. He removed the loose cloth, breath catching. It was unlike anything he had made. The fire opal burned from the void, its nucleus spinning orange and viridian, like a star flaring on the edge of collapse.

The client’s specifications had been both precise and absurd: a surround of diamonds, sapphires and emeralds in concentric rings, the platinum web filigreed so thin it was almost invisible. An impossible ask, except that Curtis could not bear to fail, not once the design had caught in his mind like a virus.

The morning’s first wind shouldered the workshop door, rattling the glass and making the walls creak in protest. Curtis’s heart doubled its tempo. Any noise in the still hour before six was a threat, a summons, or the hand of a creditor. But the lock held. No one would be by this early. He returned to the opal, and the fire inside it seemed to pulse in time with his nerves.

He should have finished the piece last week. Instead, each night he invented a new reason to adjust the settings, to retouch the micro-engraving along the platinum. Perfection demanded endless revision; he wondered, sometimes, if it was a trick the universe played on weak men, urging them to polish until the object dissolved entirely.

Curtis made himself look at the rent notice, pasted crookedly above the espresso machine. The date was ringed in red, circled so many times the ink had bled through to the wall behind. In two days, the ship’s purser would visit his door. After that, eviction and the slow migration of his belongings to some less reputable corner of the city.

Five years ago, he’d signed the lease with the hope of finally leaving the past behind: third-generation name on the Thorne line, but a bastard in the world of high jewelry. He had bet his future on the commission trade, sold the last of his father’s cufflinks to outfit this closet of a studio and tried to forget the look of disappointment in his mother’s eyes.

Curtis opened the ledger, its spine brittle from sweat and salt air. The numbers ran columns of defeat. The opal alone had cost him nearly a month’s rent, and that didn’t count the labor or the diamonds, each sourced at above-market price, as if the mere suggestion of quality could atone for the absence of actual profit. The client, Blake Rothington IV, had insisted on only the finest stones. “Daddy always says the only thing worth more than money is taste.”

He muttered it now: “Daddy always says.” The echo hollowed the room.

He snapped the ledger shut, pressed his palms to his face until crescent moons danced in his vision. Through the skin, he felt the fine grit of filings; he was always, perpetually, shedding bits of his own work. He found that comforting, in a macabre way. If the craft outlasted the craftsman, then every bead of sweat, every lost fragment, was proof of having lived.

There was, above the workbench, a photograph. Not an heirloom, just a cheap printout, affixed with yellowed tape. The face looked down in sepia benevolence. His old mentor, Leskov: first teacher, first tyrant, and the only man Curtis ever respected without reservation. Leskov had believed that art was a mirror, and you must suffer to see yourself in it. “We are only as good as the pain we endure,” the man had said, once, over a tray of ruined settings. Curtis looked to the portrait now, pleading for some sign that he was not an utter failure.

The silence answered back, as it always did.

Curtis set the loupe aside and straightened his glasses, blinking the world into its proper outlines. The clock read 5:43. Still time to adjust the final clasp, recheck the solder points, polish the opal’s cage so it shone with the hungry light of a thing newly born. He let the ritual guide his hands: grip, rotate, tighten, inspect. The movement soothed him, even as the countdown tightened its grip on his lungs.

In the far corner, the safe. He thumbed the combination, the numbers clicking in his bones. Inside, every major project of the last year, wrapped in acid-free cloth and hope. None of them had sold. He touched the top bundle, a pair of cufflinks inlaid with black diamonds. A whimsy piece, now a joke on his own situation. The market didn’t care for originality anymore, only prestige, only names.

He closed the safe and inhaled the stale, chemical scent of his world. Then, on an impulse, Curtis fished the contract from the bottom drawer and read it again, searching for any loophole. The language was clear, in the way only the language of the obscenely rich could be: “Delivery to occur by 0700 on the 14th. Failure to comply constitutes breach and forfeiture of all payment. Completion subject to the full satisfaction of the client, Mr. Blake Rothington IV.” He could hear Blake’s drawl in every clause.

Curtis’s gaze drifted to the invoice for the custom sapphires. There was a number circled in red: 100,000 dollars. That was twice what he’d budgeted, a function of last-minute demands and Rothington’s insistence on hand-selected specimens. He’d paid it, of course; he always paid, sometimes before he even received the order, afraid the supplier would blacklist him for a single late check.

He tried to recalculate, to find margin in the gaps, but the numbers only grew more dire. If he accepted the fee, he might cover rent and materials with enough to keep going for a while. If Rothington decided to stiff him, to quibble over the final product, it would be all over. The knowledge hollowed him out.

Curtis stood, the vertigo of panic catching at his knees. He gripped the back of his chair, breathing in long, slow measures. The necklace waited on the velvet, the fire in its heart mocking him. He had created a masterpiece and, in doing so, he may have authored his own destruction.

A thin finger of light probed through the workshop’s east window, scattering on the floating dust. It illuminated the photograph of Leskov, who smiled in the way of those who know suffering is inevitable. Curtis returned the gaze, searching for any sign of comfort but found only the hard resolve of an old man who never once considered giving up.

He looked again to the necklace, then to the rental notice, then to the bills stacked like cinders beside the sink. He weighed his pride against the reality pressing in from all sides. Compromise, the voice in his head suggested. Use the cheaper stones. Mask the imperfection. Hide the seams. Everyone did it nowadays, everyone but him.

Curtis exhaled, a long shuddering hiss. He lifted the necklace in both hands, feeling the icy weight of it settle into his palms. His thumb found the join between opal and platinum, where the weld was just the slightest hair off-center. Only he would notice. Only he would care.

He replaced it in the box, drew the velvet taut and wondered what it would cost him, in the end, to deliver anything less than perfection.

The numbers did not lie. Neither did the clock. Or the hunger in his own chest. He could see, now, that there would be no happy ending, not for men who made art out of suffering.

He reached for the espresso, burnt and bitter. He forced it down.

By the time the first true light edged the glass, Curtis was already drafting the apology letter in his mind. Not to Rothington, but to Leskov. And to himself, for every compromise he’d ever been forced to make. The afternoon made a sick joke of time. Curtis measured it in hours until eviction, in the length of shadows slicing across the stained floor.

The workshop’s air had grown heavier as the day wore on, solder smoke mingling with the sweet metallic rot of spent etchant. The necklace, now caged in its display box, sat like an accusation at the center of his bench, its flame opal blinking with the calculating intelligence of a predator at rest.

He scrubbed his hands raw under cold water. The nerves in his fingertips had started to misfire, sending up phantom sparks every time he brushed against cold metal. There was no good solution for nerves, save the brute force of alcohol, and he’d long since traded away the last of his vodka stash for a set of antique gravers. A bad bargain, in retrospect. He wondered if Rothington had ever made a bad bargain in his life.

At 1600, the buzzer sounded. Curtis flinched, wiped his hands on the only apron he owned — once white, now a mosaic of ruined color — and palmed the door release. The outer office was barely more than a hallway, but even so, Blake Rothington IV managed to fill it with the gravitational force of money and entitlement. The man was a study in predatory ease, standing just inside the threshold, flicking an invisible speck off the cuff of a silk shirt, eyes already scanning for points of leverage.

Curtis let him stand. Let him savor the insult of waiting. At last, Rothington strode in, the lines of his bespoke suit somehow immune to the sticky air, his patent derbies uncuffed by mortal use. He didn’t bother with pleasantries; why should he, when the world owed him its every courtesy?

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